WALT:use more adjectives
WALT: use a variety of different lengths
I see a big cloud of smoke as i walk through the trees. The sun shone down on the orange and red leaves. The big cloud of smoke comes closer and closer. All I could hear was the sound of crunching leaves as I walk closer to the big cloud of smoke. I start to hear chugging sound getting louder and louder until I can see a big black train
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