Wednesday 27 August 2014

marshmallows bare bones

WALT: create a bare bones plan

  1. boy at campfire cooking marshmallows 
  2. something creeps up behind him
  3. boy doesn't notice 
  4. boy burns his marsh mallow and chucks it in the bush
  5. burnt marshmallow hits monster  
  6. monster runs away
  7. boy has more marshmallows 
  8. monster steels marshmallows from boy
  9. monster keeps marshmallow too long in fire
  10. monster drops burning marshmallow
  11. marshmallow burns down forest

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