Friday, 11 May 2018

what I have been doing in english

we have been working on our summarising here is one of the pieces i have summarised in steps all the way down to just one word.
half
Dave Hunter is a environmentalist.
He tries to control pests to help the environment. He has to do heaps of paperwork, it's a huge jobs. He needs resource consents, permission from a medical officer.
But he still loves the job and getting out and about and making a change.
quarter
Dave hunter is a environmentalist that does pest control. Pest control is a big job with lots of paperwork. But that doesn't stop him from enjoying it. He loves getting out and about.
16 words
Dave hunter controls pest. It is a big job but he still likes it very much.
8 words
Dave controls     pests big job he loves it
4 words
Dave hunter, pest control.
1 word
Environmentalist

Trapper
learnt to do summarising because next year we will need to do alot of reading and it will help if we can shorten it.

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