Monday, 30 June 2014
Robot meets nature
WALT:use more adjectives
WALT: use a variety of different lengths
I see a big cloud of smoke as i walk through the trees. The sun shone down on the orange and red leaves. The big cloud of smoke comes closer and closer. All I could hear was the sound of crunching leaves as I walk closer to the big cloud of smoke. I start to hear chugging sound getting louder and louder until I can see a big black train
Girl on a string
WALT: show not tell
WALT: use a variety of different lengths
Her hair flew back over her shoulders as she flew over the cloudy mountains. The thick clouds of fog surrounded her as she flew over the continuous forest. She could now see dark colored water. She was slowly going down down down. Suddenly her feet were touching the water. I looked back trying to find somewhere to land but all there was, were icebergs covered with seals. I saw an iceberg that was empty so i turned my balloon over too the iceberg and landed safely.
Hanging Bed description
WALT: use a variety of different lengths
WALT: show not tell
The sound of birds echoed around the forest. The tree leaves shone in the bright sun. The colorful pillows liyed on the comfy object. the bronze ladder hanged down in the middle of the forest. The old lamp balanced as if it was going to fall down. The colorful blankets hang down from the soft object.
It hanged like a wrecking ball slowly rocking side to side.
I quickly climbed up the ladder and jumped on the soft forest bed now rocking faster from the trees.Friday, 20 June 2014
kkn - could you take the heat
in Denmark the worlds hottest pepper the Ghost pepper was eating by 1000 people. there was lots of milk for the people if it got to hot for them. milk is better than water at cooling down your mouth. most of them came out with red faces.
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