WALT: use a variety of different lengths
WALT: show not tell
The sound of birds echoed around the forest. The tree leaves shone in the bright sun. The colorful pillows liyed on the comfy object. the bronze ladder hanged down in the middle of the forest. The old lamp balanced as if it was going to fall down. The colorful blankets hang down from the soft object.
It hanged like a wrecking ball slowly rocking side to side.
I quickly climbed up the ladder and jumped on the soft forest bed now rocking faster from the trees.
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