English creative writing

today in English i was working on my 1st person and 3rd person writing here is some of my work.

1st person

Im sitting at the top of the run staring at the take off to the jump going through my head all the things that could go wrong. Im so scared my hands are shaking, its too late to turn back now i have to do it. The smell of fresh air and energy drinks fills my lungs. I get on my bike and go through my head what i have to do. I start to pedal, faster and faster, I hit the take off and pull up. Im in the air for what feels like forever but before i know it im getting ready to land. I hit the ground, I burst with happiness knowing that i have finally accomplished my goal.

3rd person

He sits at the top of the run in starting at the take off to the jump. He's so scared and nervous that his hands are shaking. The smell of all the energy drinks fills the air, he gets on his bike and starts pedalling. He charges towards the jump and leaps into the air, time slows as he floats through the air towards the landing. He has done it, he landed it successfully.

graphing in maths

here is my graphs i learnt how to make with google sheets.

What I done in Term 2

In mechanical engineering we made a mini bbq me and brayden not long before the end of the term we cooked sausages with me steine and he supplied drinks and the sausages. We used old gas bottles to make them.

In English I done a presentation on the conections between coach carter, Kurt Yeager and jelly mcgarry then I presented it. It had to be at least 3 mins long and had to have around 5 - 10 pages long.

In maths I improved my algerbra skills and learnt how to factorise quadratic’s 

In art I made several pieces and also helped paint a background thing for a play or something. 

Term 2 I accomplished a bit and learnt heaps!

what I have been doing in english

we have been working on our summarising here is one of the pieces i have summarised in steps all the way down to just one word.

half Dave Hunter is a environmentalist. He tries to control pests to help the environment. He has to do heaps of paperwork, it's a huge jobs. He needs resource consents, permission from a medical officer. But he still loves the job and getting out and about and making a change.

quarter Dave hunter is a environmentalist that does pest control. Pest control is a big job with lots of paperwork. But that doesn't stop him from enjoying it. He loves getting out and about.

16 words Dave hunter controls pest. It is a big job but he still likes it very much.

8 words Dave controls     pests big job he loves it

4 words Dave hunter, pest control.

1 word Environmentalist Trapper

learnt to do summarising because next year we will need to do alot of reading and it will help if we can shorten it.