WALT: create a bare bones plan
- boy at campfire cooking marshmallows
- something creeps up behind him
- boy doesn't notice
- boy burns his marsh mallow and chucks it in the bush
- burnt marshmallow hits monster
- monster runs away
- boy has more marshmallows
- monster steels marshmallows from boy
- monster keeps marshmallow too long in fire
- monster drops burning marshmallow
- marshmallow burns down forest
Hi Mitch
ReplyDeleteI like your theme I think the full story would be cool. Why did you have a monster? I like the pic. I wonder if the monster will die.
From Josh!
howdy josh
Deletethe monster will definitely die! and I had a monster because I wanted to keep it a surprise until you scroll down and see the pic
I like the pic too. Great imaginative writing.
ReplyDeleteI chose the pic because he looks like a hungry monster
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