Monday 25 August 2014

ski trip 2014

WALT: describe a moment in a time 

I holded on to the t-bar, My hands were numb as I took my gloves off. I looked at all the mountains as I put my gloves back on.  I put my skies on and whooshed down the mountain. Every time I turned a big cloud of snow would follow me. I did one big turn at the bottom of the mountain and completely stopped right in front of my dad, he was covered in snow!

Why do you think he was covered in snow put a comment below saying what you think.

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